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Money is the most powerful weapon in the humans existing and it could take over our lives without us even realizing it I was born into a family that started out with nothing We were constantly worried about whether or not we would have food on our table When I was little I didnt realize how important money was until one day when something happened to me that will change my thought about the value of moneyI was about seven or eight year old when I first learned how to ride the bicycle It was the most excited moment of my life because I was able to learn something by myself without my mother helped Back then my mother had to work day and night in order to earn enough money to support my brother and me As a result she didnt have a lot of time to spend with us on the various activities that most of the little kids did with their parents As soon as I learned how to ride the bicycle I took my bicycle for a ride without telling my mom As an inexperienced rider I didnt know what to do when I went down a steep hill and as a result I had crashed my bike and hit my nose against the bikes handle The next thing I knew was the blood gushing from my nose to my white shirt to my short I dont remember what happened next from my accident but when I opened my eyes my wound had healed However the scar from that incident will always remain with me because back then my family didnt have enough money for me to go a hospital to get treatment My mother only used Chinese herbal medicine to treat my wound This incident was also the first time I saw my mom cried The woman I thought I knew was a strong woman who could overcome all of
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