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I have always struggled all my life just for a normal life I appreciate all the difficulties I have been through because these are the things that have made a tough person on the inside I know what the real world is actually like I feel like I know my place in itI have always known want I wanted to be in life It all started when week after week I would see my mom lying on the bed half conscious and drowsy because of all the steroids the doctors would give my mom When I was seven years old there was an incident that scarred my life forever My dad had gone to a job fair my brother was one years old and my grandma was downstairs watching the typical Indian soap operas I was doing my homework next to my mom Even though she barely spoke to me I felt comfortable around her I always struggled in math I couldnt understand what a pictograph was I asked my mom I knew it was pointless but I thought it would be better than saying nothing at all Mom whats a pictograph I murmured Cake she slurred In my head I thought what is wrong with this woman After about ten minutes my mom would not get up no matter how much I tapped her on her shoulder I got water from the bathroom and sprinkled it on her face There was no effect I yelled to my grandma to come upstairs She came and I tried lifting her up but her bloated 170 pound body would not budge Finally after a few minutes my grandma and I were able to get her in a sitting position We opened her mouth and put water in it The first time the water drained out of her mouth on to her shirt The second time she choked on it I was a confused child in tears I
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