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That ocean so big and blue Some days crystal clear some days as if itwas enraged I felt tiny as a fly in the middle of the Ocean but closingmy eyes and imagining myself with just a kayak and a paddle made me feellike i could do anything in the world at that possible moment i wasaway from society i learned how to navigae in the bug blue sea and iwas proud of myself summer search gave me the chance to do this andthis is something i will never forget The ocean taught me how to nevergive up that i could do it if i put my ming to it that no matter howhard anything is it must be possible The main thing i learned was inorder or others to believe in you you have to believe in yourself Myname is Melany Mercedes I lived in the wilderness and Sea kayaked inthe Coast of Maine for 3 weeksHaving had this experience made me grow a whole lot i went in theretrying to show everyone that i was not the weakest link i forgot aboutlife lessons and new experiences i just wanted to meet new people andfor them to treat me different than back at home Back at home peopleusually tend to put me down a lot and ofcourse to me its nothing ilaugh right along with them like i dont care but in reality it bothersme I grew up with all my friends talking about me or making fun of meThere was not one point in the day where my friends would talk seriousto me still up to this day it happens but being in that trip made mewho i am todayBeing in Maine for 3 weeks with no social contact to family or friendswas difficult it was only 11 of us in the group We were all verydiverse in personality most of them were rich and I was the only SummerSearcher But i
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