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Describe the world you come from - for example your familycommunity or school - and tell us how your world has shapedyour dreams and aspirationsI would describe my family as my whole world My mom dad andtwo sisters are what I hold most dear to my heart My twosisters are 10 and 15 years old They are both so lovely intheir own unique ways My mom and my dad are hard workers andgreat parents Great parents who have taught me valuablelessons about life and happiness They are the reason why Iwant to get an education and the reason why I am me My parentsare my inspiration for doing my best every day and for wantingto succeedBoth my parents have always emphasized the importance of schoolfor my future since my mom only ended high school and my dadnever finished it They both have been labor workers andunderstand the importance of education I know they both hadthe talent to do something different with their lives I haveseen my fathers natural talent for math and art and my momstalent for science and I can imagine my dad as an architect andmy mom as an agricultural engineer her dream job They had toforget about school and enter the work force to help theirfamiliesMy mom became gave up the life of a worker when she became amother and now a housewife I am eternally grateful to herfor giving up part of her life to raise my sisters and IMy dad became a construction worker and works hard every day sohe can give his family everything they need They want me to dowell in school and give me a good future I want them to beproud of me and I make them happyI take my parents opinions concerning my future veryseriouslybut what they want for me is not completely whatdrives me to want to go to college and have a good educationWhilemy parents are a great part of why I want
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