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If anyone knows me they know all I do is cheer I have been cheering since second grade and I could not imagine my life without it One of the main reasons I continue to cheer is because of the people involved including my two coaches Reed Jackson and Michael Murphree also known as Murph Once when we were in the award session at one of our largest competitions they stood with arms crossed tense expressions and remained silent However as soon as they proclaimed our main competitor as second place they went equally crazy When it comes to waiting for the outcome of a competition they both are rather nervous people However as soon as their hard work is rewarded they return to their excitable selves If someone asked me who the two most significant men in my life are I would definitely choose Reed and Murph I do not have a father figure in my life but I have always considered them the closest thing that would compare to one Although the two share a mutual profession they look as different as oranges and apples Murph stands at a towering six feet and two inches while Reed is rather petite at five feet and nine inches On some occasions the two share the same scruffy facial hair however Murph keeps his longer than Reed does The shape of a linebacker is the textbook description to visualize Murphs body size Reeds shape is nothing unusual Not too strong not too scrawny just like Tom Cruise They both have brown eyes with a slight hint of hazel My coaches are family men Each has a wife and a beautiful young daughter When they are with me and my team they treat us with the same nurturing attitude as they do their own family When it comes to personality traits my two coaches have many qualities that are the same with miniscule differences Both
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