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Game OverAs I stood at the three point line the ball seemed to be in slowmotion Screams from the crowd came as the ball dropped through thenet Not only did this shot go in but it dropped through the net withsuch force that it made a sound that was heard throughout the gym Thegym was packed and the fans were on their feet I had just hit my firstthree pointer of my varsity basketball career As our team set up thepress sweat dripped from my face I was close enough to kiss myopponent there was no way he was going to get the ball He shoved mebackward and he planted his foot on mine he then pushed off and ran forthe inbounder I fell back a few feet and sprinted towards my man Asthe inbounder released the ball with a firm push I stuck my handout inhopes for a steal SNAP As the ball was deflected towards the right myman ran and picked it up I quickly looked down at my finger and withfear and pain walked over to my bench My pinkie-finger on my righthand was at a ninety degree ankle as sweat dripped down may face Icould feel myself getting hot My stomach seemed to drop and I wasfeeling as if I was on a roller coaster The game had been stopped andI was brought into the coaches room My assistant coach led me into theroom and sat me down on a wooden chair I began to feel very cold andmy finger began to have a shooting pain This pain was not presentbefore and was no making itself known that there was something wrongwithMy parents entered the room my mother carrying a face that I never hadseen before My father with a calm collective look to him Theassistant then began to explain that there was to deal with this eithergo to the hospital and miss the game or deal with it write in
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