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I on my way to Anaheim California with my crazy weird loved family We were singing songs my sister sang with the radio that sang All of our bridges burned down Ive wasted my nights you turned out the lights now Im paralyzed still stuck in that time when we called it love but even the sunsets in paradiseBefore I go to the next paragraph let me fast forward to the problemMeanwhile I was at Knotts Berry Farm my mom told me to go on a ride with my brother since my friends were going on there too I groaned I was tired that my own two legs couldnt carry me I groaned and kind of yelled Alright fine Ill go on the ride with Joseph I stomped my way to the ride My phone was in my pocket When I got off the ride I was dizzy and more tired then ever that I got a huge headache I was so sleepy once we left which was about 946 I was reaching inside my pocket to get my phone until I realized it was GONE I couldnt believe it I lost my phone I asked Mom do you have my phone she looked in her purse Go ask your dad he might have it she replied I swiftly ran to my dad Hey dad do you have my phone I asked My dad looked in his pockets I went back to my mom saying it wasnt with him I got mad and angryAt the beach I asked Hey dad arent we gonna go to Knotts and get the phone He said Yes I layed on the cold sandy ground started putting sand on me Thirty minutes later my whole body was covered except my face arms My moms friend took a pic Of me My friends siblings came from the beach climbing with their wet feet to take
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