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They say you can tell the intelligence of a person by their writing if that was the case then before this semester I would have been considered unintelligent My writing over this semester has improved hands down My sentences in the papers that I have written have improved I can stop sentences so they make since without losing the informational value I learned the correct sentence structure to make my sentences clear to readers not just me when I read the sentences I feel that my spelling has improved drastically also my use of homonyms have improve I can specify which word to use appropriately I also learned how to correctly learn essays and I learned about the different types of essaysPrimarily my sentence as far as sentence structure has improved remarkable I have learned that my sentences do have to have a subject that cannot be part of the independent clause I also learned that transitional words are not frowned upon I did learn that not all transitional words can be used in all writings I have learned from my writing experiences over the semester that I need to control my writing ideas keep focused on one topic at a time not bounce back and forth I learned that I can stop a rambling sentence without losing my information and my readers Secondly my spelling has improved so much When I was in high school a couple of years ago I couldnt spell well I could spell but I wasnt good at sitting down and writing a sentence without misspelled words I have learned which homonyms to use in the correct placing in a sentence I learn that there is a difference between affect and effect also the difference between to too and two My writing now makes since with my word placement I know now that I can
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