No Touching! The Internet Will Keep Us from Having to Interact

This is a humorous, sarcastic look at the impacts that the internet has on our society. The student notes that as technology progresses, people may eventually be free from having any personal contact.

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Bob's feedback:

"This is a funny, sarcastic look at the impacts of the internet. However, the sarcastic tone makes it difficult to tell what exactly you're trying to say. Are you implying that these impacts are negative, or are you simply overstating the impacts for the sake of humor?

Your introduction carries a serious tone, making the shift in the second paragraph somewhat jarring. This shift could lose your reader.

Make sure to proofread to address run-on sentences and small but frequent errors."

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(Kibin, 2024)

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Kibin. (2024). No touching! the internet will keep us from having to interact. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/no-touching-the-internet-will-keep-us-from-having-to-interact-SZrKe2RF

Be sure to capitalize proper nouns (e.g. Egypt) and titles (e.g. Macbeth) in the essay title portion of your citation.

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("No Touching! The Internet Will Keep Us from Having to Interact.")

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"No Touching! The Internet Will Keep Us from Having to Interact." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/no-touching-the-internet-will-keep-us-from-having-to-interact-SZrKe2RF

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1. "No Touching! The Internet Will Keep Us from Having to Interact." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/no-touching-the-internet-will-keep-us-from-having-to-interact-SZrKe2RF.

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"No Touching! The Internet Will Keep Us from Having to Interact." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/no-touching-the-internet-will-keep-us-from-having-to-interact-SZrKe2RF.