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How Woodrow Wilson Responded to World War I

This essay on the First World War explains how Woodrow Wilson's reluctance to involve America in the fighting changed into a desire to ensure America's presence in talks after the war.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You are off to a good start, and your discussion is focused and efficient. The writing is overall clear, but I notice frequent opportunities to finetune diction and syntax, and to catch errors, to make sure the reader is getting the most polished reading experience possible. Watch out for comma usage, clarity when using pronouns, and precision of language, such as in the conclusion, where the third sentence could be read as suggesting Wilson anticipated WWII. I notice more frequent issues in the last paragraph ("stop keep" and "had could"), so consider proofreading backward, starting at the end and moving up toward the introduction."

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