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Beach B-day There I was in Florida or maybe I was dreaming The perfect escape plan was finally in effect It was nice to be Calgary free snow free and most of all parent free Looking forward to a whole week of new experiences to be had new people to meet in what felt like an entirely different world I was looking forward to so many things but most of all I was looking forward to finding out what made my best friend who she is today All the bits and pieces of her southern friends and family coming together creating a giant mosaic named Keightley Bertram I felt so lucky to be included in such a trip adopted for a week by Keightleys family to celebrate her birthday in style Such an awesome party it was going to be with an unlimited amount of space people and lack of restrictions This was definitely going to be a trip to be remembered That first breath of humid tropical air in the morning a refreshing change from the dry mountain air of home All the memories of the plane trip and the many wasted classroom hours spent day dreaming of the fun these eight days would be packed with all came flooding back in that one moment It was incredibly energizing in those few seconds I could feel myself become almost giddy with anticipation and I was still barely even awake I could tell it was still early in the morning but the sun was already peeking over the sea casting wild colors in the sky the thought of drifting back to sleep was a joke I was awake now and probably would be for the next eight days I crept out of the room quietly and tried to make my way through the cottage without waking the Bertram family I stepped outside and onto the silky sand that seemed to stretch on
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