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"I note that you misspell "millennium." Grammar and spell checkers are easily found, and you should use them. To my knowledge, ASCAP is an organization involved in music publishing and not a stock index. There is no reason to put "fad" in quotes. You overuse commas. Your sentences are sometimes long and confusing. You should write simple, concise sentences that are easy to understand. You incorrectly hyphenate expressions and words. You give advice with no documented information. You should cite authoritative sources. What you say seems sensible, but stronger writing gives the reader more confidence in what you say."
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Kibin. (2024). Investing in the stock market. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/investing-in-the-stock-market-Z80x1Py1
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"Investing in the Stock Market." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/investing-in-the-stock-market-Z80x1Py1.
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