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On a cold Friday morning John and Lina were getting ready to go to school John was an eighth grader and Lina was in her sixth grade It was very cold and dark outside since the sun had not risen yet Lina was very hungry and wanted to have a delicious and huge breakfast She wanted scrambled eggs with cheese golden brown toast and sixteen ounces of natural and freshly squeezed orange juice John was very hungry too and he had dreamed of having for breakfast some fresh pouring butter hash browns with toasted wheat bread crispy bacon and a full cup of dark hot chocolate Since their mother was too sleepy to prepare breakfast she decided to take them to McDonalds Their wish had certainly come true John and Lina were sure this McDonalds breakfast would be like no otherAs soon as they arrived to McDonalds they smelled the wonderful odor of the delicious hash browns being cooked They got out of their moms new sport car and ran inside the restaurant leaving their mom in the car because she was very tired John could not resist the smell of the fresh crispy indescribable hash browns and the crunchy odorous and extremely delicious bacon that made him drool McDonalds had the most delicious fast food of any restaurant he had ever been toJohn and Lina soon realized that something had changed since their last visit to McDonalds It was like a wonderful dream that had come true After a while John and Lina could not believe that a big colorful carnival had been built inside the fast food restaurant A mixture of pink red blue orange green and purple colors with an enchanted princess house for Lina and a big basketball court with balloons of every color and size that now existed in this huge McDonalds restaurant This was like being in a rocket and seeing the world from a different perspective where people
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