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The Increased Competition in Sports Is Causing More Injuries

In this essay, the student argues that the mindset about sports needs to change, as the heightened intensity in games has led to an increase in injuries as well. The student discusses several types of knee injuries, including tears to the ACL, PCL, and MCL, and the sports in which they commonly occur.
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Emily's feedback:

"Your essay is overall very well written and shows that you have a lot of knowledge about sports injuries. I've played sports my whole life and come across many people with these injuries, so it was very interesting to read an in-depth account of the various injuries. Just make sure to include citations and a bibliography for any outside sources you may have used for this information. Also, when discussing the PCL tear, you state that this can happen often in car accidents. While that example definitely provides a good visual, your focus is on sports-related injuries, so it would be helpful to include a more detailed example of a PCL tear in a particular sport or two. Fixing these things will help tighten up your essay even more."

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