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Aaron where is my money Sean Harrison asked I did not reply because I did not have it Smack he slapped me My skin was burning like fire I was ruined Sean was a leader and not a spiritual leader He was the leader of a gang We are in a dark alley I tried to walk off but a strong arm grabbed my wrist Then came a punch A gush of blood rushed out of my nose A series of punches followed by a sharp silver object striked me more than once I fell to the ground with a thud Why did I join a gang I slowly picked myself up I suddenly wanted a new start I got home and started to plan my new lifeI started wearing pants with belts and dress shirts I was not going to be carrying myself around like a bad influence The next day I saw Sean and his entourage He approached me with a powerful aura Where is my money he asked I handed him his money Why arent you wearing the right clothes he asked I replied Im done with this gang He stared at me with a sly smile So you think you can make it without my help I know I can Then I walked off feeling strong about my decision I am going to get an education At first I skipped class but I never really realized how much it came in handy Therefore I stopped skipping class In middle school I was a smart kid I had all Pre-AP classes but that all changed when I got to high school My As started plummeting to Fs This was all because I decided to hang out with Sean I arrived at the old gray door and I decided to open it I slowly walked in and everyone was staring at me Mr Johnson come take a seat Mrs Smith said
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