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When I was little my parents would take me my three sisters Ceairra the control freak Stormii the slightly stuck-up and Cheyenne the slacker and my two brothers Kevin the Cop and Davey the Silly one to the beach Whenever we went to the beach my family had a rule called the waist rule and you were not allowed to go out in the water any deeper than your waist One day we were playing deeper than I was supposed to be I thought I was alright before we started to go back in but suddenly I stepped into a dip and the water was above my head I had to tread water to try and get out but there was a RIP current an underwater current pushing out pushing me back while I paddled forward I was stuck I would try to take advantage of each wave that pushed me forward slightly but the current just pushed me back It felt like at least ten minutes went by when my dad finally turned around and saw me struggling He swam back and pushed me out of the dip I made it back to manageable waters and we began to play againMy fathers birthday was coming up and I knew he wanted a new computer desk My sister Ceairra is a control freak about the organization and everything going as planned and she usually is in control of the collective gifts So I let her know that we should get a desk I told her I would find and buy the desk and everyone can pay me back later Unfortunately I am a procrastinator and I didnt find the desk in time for my dads birthday The day of his birthday the family got together for a dinner at my house My sister asked me about the desk and I told her that I hadnt bought it yet She got extremely mad but I wasnt
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