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There have been numerous people who have influenced my life in manyways like my family and my friends One of the biggest things that Iwas influenced by was to find something that I was good at If I was notinfluenced to find something I am good at at a young age I might stillbe looking for it Once you find that one thing that suits you feel likea weight has been lifted off your shoulders it is the greatest feelingThat one thing I was good at took some time to find but that is onething that will not changeHow it all started was my parents wanted me to get out and try thingsbecause they thought it would be good for me I had tried ballet tapdancing and softball I did each of those for about a year and then Iwould quit I quit everything My friend Rachel was good at her sportwhich was basketball and my other friend Alivia was good atcheerleading so I felt like I should try more sports to see if I couldfind the one that I was good for me That is how my friends influence One day I asked my parents to sign me up for club soccer at Troy Parkand they said yes I was so happy they actually said yes because I hadquit everything before As I started playing soccer at the park Irealized this was it this is what I am good at Therefore in 2002 Ifound the thing that I loved and something I was actually good at whichwas soccer If it were not for the influence from my family and friendsI probably would have never tried out soccer It is somewhat crazybecause I have a soccer player body type I have an athletic bodystructure and I can sprint which is usually the qualities of a soccerplayer As I started playing on different teams and playing on selectsoccer teams I decided I needed to try to
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