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It was a day like any other It started out normal except for the fact that I was going to be in a hospital waiting room for some time during the day It was spring break of my freshman year so I was not in school which was a very good thing considering the events that I did not know were about to come I was expecting to be able to talk to my dad that night so I had not talked to him that morning Little did I know that my whole world was about to be changed from the inside outWhen I got to the hospital everything was going as scheduled however I went out with my mom to get dinner to come back and find out that something had gone seriously wrong They had told us that it was just a routine colon surgery but the unthinkable happened My dad had lost a lot of blood during the surgery but while he was in recovery they found out that he was experiencing some internal bleeding as well At first I had no idea what this meant I knew that something was wrong but it was as though someone spilled his or her milk in the cafeteria it didnt seem that bad My mom tried to explain it to me but she was sobbing like someone who had just heard that there was a death in their family seeing that worried me After another two hours or so in surgery I received word that he was fine I thought that it was all going to be okay after that Once again however little did I know a week later something drastic was going to happen that would change us allAfter the scare that we had with my dads first surgery everything went well for about four days but then we got some terrible news We were told that my dads staples in his
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