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When I walked into school my friend was telling about how her mom kicked her out again She told me I needed to leave and so I left I cant stand being with her Boohoo if she could have honestly read my mind she wouldve known I didnt care Its not that I didnt care about her having to leave her home but that every day I heard the stories about how her life is and still is so hard Everyone has a story but whatever that story is its really up to you to change and make a difference in your life I see no reason to complain I can relate to having to come up from a bad life but never felt sorry for myself I was only three when my father had turned himself in Obviously I was too young to even remember what happen after that but growing up I wondered why my dad was never around anymore As I got a little older my mom told me my dad was in school to become an astronaut However I think now and really wished my mom made a better lie about my dad because my uncles would make fun of me about it Hey Jacquie wheres your dad at my Uncle Lou askedAt school I answered Laughter would literally come out of their mouths but I wondered why they would laugh if becoming an astronaut was actually pretty cool Years went by and I visited my dad for the very first time in Milan Michigan Prisonwhere he was I was about seven at this time to know now he wasnt at school Police guards roamed around the visitation room and I would just stare I definitely stared at the badges-they shined very bright but I didnt stare at it for no reason my reason was how the good guys can take my dad Wasnt he a good guy What did he
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