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Looking beyond first impressions Drops of rain shot from the skies slamming the grown as though enemy missiles Puddles formed quickly and streams of dirt poured onto the streets Auburn leaves drifted by turning and submerging in the sooty like rapids The neighborhood transformed into a giant lake random isles of refuge overflowed with kids drenched by the first autumn rain The trees took on the role of giant umbrellas offering protection from the seasons wrath One by one everyone ran towards their houses across the puddles splashing water erupting with high pitched screams of joy and sadness I was the only one left hiding under the tree I stayed there as long as I could until the moment when the cauldron my playground started to overflow with water and I had to take my chances and run Ducking under the covers of the overhangs of the roofs on the buildings I hurried towards my front door The door into my apartment building was within reach when I heard a soft moan Turning around several times I failed to see anything but the gray buildings gray asphalt and the gray sky Getting ready for another sprint and taking a deep breath while scouting the path ahead of me I spotted a tiny ball of hair that seemed to wobble slowly towards me It took me a while to figure out what it was beneath all the hair and lumps of half dissolved dirt Whose puppy is this I called him over when I noticed the dirty rag and a drenched cardboard box on the steps of one of the buildings What kind of a person would leave him out looking around and not seeing anyone I knelt down and kept on calling the pooch over Cautiously he smelled my hands sticking his tiny black nose into my palms and standing up on his hind legs I didnt know what to do I wanted to take
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