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Loosing a loved one will leave anyone empty hopeless helpless and depressed It is like someone burning a persons heart with a cigarette leaving the cigarette marks all over the heart to burn down to the flesh Smelling the fuels in the air and the person searching for help and hope Going through death is like restarting childhood all over again First starting to talk crawl than finally walkingThe day my Granny past away was the day I fell into misery My Granny was the best thing that ever happen to me in my life She was always there to comfort me advise me motivate my strength and weakness took care of me school me through boys She always loved me to every second she breathe She is the person that made me who I am today Her death was the recap of my childhoodOn a rainy evening Im sitting down on the floor texting my friends giggling and smiling showing all my teeth As I am being distracted from cleaning out my closet the next text I received Last I know my phone screen was filled with drop of tears rushing down my fat cheeks like a waterfall I open the text and it was from my cousin Jalacey we were very close and hung out a lot so when I read the text she told me to come to hospital quickly because Granny got sick As I am reading that text message my head just spin and spin It felt like I was on a marry go round A thousands questions was going across my mind I got up from the floor slowly and looked out the rainy window The rain poured down angrily with rage sounding like rocks were falling from heaven I just stood near the cold window an cried my heart out until I felt a hand touch my shoulder Turning around slowly it was my mother Lastly
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