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While i was in church i did not think my day would be as intense as itwas I was sitting with my cousin Tiffany she was wearing the mostgorgeous outfit We were so excited to get out so we could spend the daywith each other We always had so much fun together Although the daywas funny the night was very frighteningAfter getting out of my cousins burgendy Honda Civic we all walkedinto her huge white and black house We all kicked off our high heelsand rested waiting on the call for our dinner reservations While i waswalking towards the couch to sit down i started singing my brotherAlfreds favorite song Then Tiffany remembered that she had a bag ofclothes for him She dashed up her steep hard-wooden steps to gather theclothes in the ginormous clear bag Meanwhile we were all laughingabout the tall strange man that was loudly shouting in the back of thechurch throughout the entire service Then we recived the phone callthat our table was ready Carla yelled up the stairs to tell Tiffany itwas time to go She swiftly turned the sharp corner and as she was goingfor the first step it happened Tiffany fell down the stairs Shelooked just as scared as we didTiffanys mouth was wide open as she was ready to yell Her eyes wereglassy and filled with tears ready to roll Her hair was flowing side toside in the wind she created while falling down the stairs Her nose wasscrunched up Her eyebrows shifted up as far as they could go Tiffanyswrinkles in her forhead were as deep as the sea Her facial expressionswere as bad to look at as the fallShe was thinking it would be her last breath Her legs were wide opentrying to stop her fall but it wouldnt work As she was franticalytrying to reach the handel she cutt her arm on an sharp nail hanging ofthe banister The stairs were screaming as
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