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Dinner was served I sat at a table full of delicacy however only a plain cracker with no decoration drew my attention Somehow I heard a faint chirp in my mindWhen I entered elementary school my grandparents gifted me two gorgeous budgies They had green glossy features sparkling round black eyes crooked yellow beaks and long straight tails They were jumping and tweeting dynamically when we first met just like young infants reaching out for their mother Looking into their black-diamond-like twinkling eyes listening to their wonderful singing like flowing fountains I felt warmth spread all over my body I cherished and protected my budgies as if they were my siblings that I could never legally have I greeted them every morning in a gentle manner they would stand in a line like two little soldiers with their heads up high and anticipating review When I played the piano the two classical vocal singers would sing along to the melody with enthusiasm I attempted to educate the two creatures by reading to them however they chirped impatiently in a soft tone I would advise them in earnest every kid will experience a rebellious period you will regret it if you do not listen to me As this relationship developed more profoundly they would simply light up when they saw me like they saw the bright life-giving sunMy favorite activity with them was to feed them a cracker though the process was simply holding one end of the cracker and letting them eat the other end Every time I appeared with a cracker they would sing in a most clear and melodious sound eagerly jumping around in their cage and striving to take the first bite of the cracker like two newborn puppies rushing to their mother to get breast-feed Surprisingly they would not swallow the cracker with pleasure as they were supposed to they would peck on it and shake their heads rapidly to get
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