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As a kid nothing was easy for me Although I am the oldest I am also the only strong believer Things just never really played to my advantage My family never really stood behind me in many things My dad was the worst because he is Muslim we clashed on our beliefs We fought constantly more than a dog would bark at a cat It made such an impact on my life My heart felt as if a part of me was slowly dyingEvery night I spent praying asking why my family never got me Why was I such a cast out What made me so different I never got a clear answer At times I felt as if the world was out to make sure anything I did would fail My mind would wander to places of complete darkness and life would certainly get the best of me The part of me my family had been longing to see so they could quickly and gladly judge me about was beginning to arise from the depths of my heart Though I fought hard it was a battle unlike any Id ever had and at such a young age I was simply not preparedAfter fighting so hard I finally felt my heart drop BOOM There it went what I thought was the last piece of hope was gone My family so eagerly jumped right on my case when I started messing up I felt so unloved and unwanted I was clearly misunderstood No one even tried to listen My faith had been shaken so hard It was as if an earthquake had grabbed hold of my faith and hit it with a 105 I was on the rocks deep in the wraps of sin headed down a path of utter destruction I was at the lowest of lows How much more hurt did I have to endure When all else fell only people
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