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It was a normal summer day for My best friend Johnathan and I I was about the age of 7 and he was 10 It was one of those summers where all we did was work the whole summer Johnathan had reminded me that I should begin on practicing my dance routine because we would be having a show that night So I got up off my lazy butt and began to dance my butt off Johnathan watched at frst then remembered he had to practice tooThe night time had come and our parents have just barely dropped us off at our show This was going to be my first time up on the stage alone It was kind of nerve recking at first That night there were about 20 performers I was to be the 10th to go up Johnathan was to go up before I did When he went up on the stage he did an amazing job Now it was my turn They called my name up to go on stage I was shaking in fear It was a crowd of about 400 people The music had begun but I didnt I froze in shock I stood there like a fool It was the most humiliating moment of my life I said to myself I never wanna dance againThe following day had come and I was just laying in my bed Johnathan had come over with some candy and to talk to me about the night before I admit I was kinda of mad he brought it up but at the same time I was glad We talked about it and the Johnathan saidVeronica that performance of yours was only the first of many solos I knew for a fact that you would fail at it but I let you go up anyways to let you know that you cant always succeedWe then looked at each other and smiled I
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