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It was my first day of seventh grade The sun was shinning the birds were singing and I was crying I had just found out that I was moving I moved around a lot in California The home that I had in Las Vegas had been my first and only stable home for two years That was a record I did not want to move I did not want to leave my friends and my school but at the same time I had to The friends that I had were having a bad influence on me and I was really behind in school I didnt know it at the time but my parents were just doing whats best or meI sobbed in the passenger seat of the U-Haul van as it drove away from our first house My parents told me that Utah would be better but I was so focused on the bad I didnt bother even trying to see the favorable things As we pulled up to our new house all I was thinking about was our old house and how much I longed for it I tried to beguile my parents and act like I liked the new house but like I said I was so focused on the bad I couldnt see the good I knew that our new house was smaller my room was smaller and that a bunch of our furniture got lacerated I also knew that our new house was nicer there were no stairs there was a better kitchen and that the backyard was much bigger I didnt care because it wasnt in Vegas where all my friends were I tried to hide the fact that I wanted to move back to our old house in Vegas but it didnt work Im not very good at hiding things and my mom can read my like a book so she new I was upset I had already started
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