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One of the biggest experiences Ive had that had a big impact on me wasmoving in with Miguel and Audrey who are one of my friends dad and stepmom Although Ive only been with them for about eight months I havelearned so much from both like being the bigger man in a situationToday I still live with their help and support and still let me knowthat you are never really alone no matter what I had moved in with thembecause about six months before that I was living with my friends momteaching me that you never really know a person It was around the end of the summer of 2012 and its almostthe beginning of my senior year My mom around this time was takingcare of my newborn baby brother my little sister and my nine-year oldbrother struggling to pay rent with her boyfriend By this time my momand her boyfriend then decided that they wanted to move to Taos but Ididnt want to leave I wanted to stay at Santa Fe High and finish up mysenior year there My mom tried hard to find a place in Santa Fe but shedidnt seem to have any luck While my mom was busy searching I wasspending most of my time with two of my friends who I didnt want toleave As we all spent time with each other they were telling me howthey were no longer staying with their dad because they didnt feelwanted there so the made the choice to move in with their momfull-time I began to spend more and more time with them and their momuntil one day their mom had the idea for me to stay with them until mysenior year was over At some point my mom had her both discussed theidea and agreed to let me stay Things
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