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After moving to Macon in 1999 with my mom and new step-dad my mom felt that it was necessary to find a church my siblings and I could grow up around Little did she know that was the best decision she could have made for us Once we experimented with what felt like a million churches we finally found St Francis Episcopal church here in Macon Having a religious back ground benefits you extremely when it comes to your overall well-being Going through so many changes at a young age was extremely difficult Not only was I dealing with a new-step dad and step-brothers I was trying to make friends at a new school which we all know is awful After attending St Francis and being baptized I truly felt at ease with everything Things seemed to fall right into place I was making good grades making new friends and I was even bonding with my step-dad Not only was St Francis our second home everyone there was family Thats why when my step-dad adopted me it only felt right to share this experience them We held an adoption ceremony shortly after the adoption was complete After the ceremony was over there wasnt a dry eye in the building Sharing such a personal experience with them meant the world to my familyIn 2008 everything went downhill my parents separated and we all stopped attending church For me this was a horrible time My parents separating caused me to rebel I started getting bad grades and honestly didnt care about anything I was constantly getting in trouble and argued nearly every day with not only my parents but also my siblings Everyone could see the destructive path I was going down but no one could help After tenth grade I realized I needed to stop messing around and get serious about school and life in general But since I messed around so much I couldnt
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