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Moving always sucks whether it is the leaving being somewhere new that youre not used to or the packing When my dad told us we were moving to Virginia I about cried Everything seemed so horrible in the beginning but then something completely unexpected happenedThe first thing that got me upset about leaving was that I had some really great friends and a really amazing boyfriend of two years I was really close with one certain group of friends too who Id hang out with about every weekend The boyfriend was great and all until I told him I was moving he didnt care so I guess that made it somewhat easier to leave But I still miss my friends from Missouri and talk to a few of them every daySecondly a big negative was leaving the great school I went to The school had so many awesome opportunities a lot of freedom and a wide variety of electives Also before I had found out about moving I signed up to be a part of the yearbook staff which was a big thing there I had written out an essay for it and everything Finally I made a part of the staff but had to then turn it down because of the moveLastly I moved to Virginia When I started 8th grade at Kate Collins I was so bummed because I didnt know anybody but then I met my best friend and didnt even know it yet On my second day of Spanish a new student showed up and ended up sitting next to me Now that same girl is still the best friend I could ever ask for Ive never met another person who is almost the exact same as me in every single way possibleSo honestly Im so extremely glad to have moved here I would never have expected to meet such an amazing friend who I could never live a day
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