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I read one story on Muddy Cup where I learned both why Javier loves his native land the Dominican Republic and why he is glad to be in New York City This story reminds me of my own story and what happened to me when I came to this country from Dominican Republic In the following paragraph I will explain how my beginning in this country wasFirst I was writing about what I like and dislike about my beautiful country The Dominican Republic is amazing because there we can enjoy the best vacation that is never going to have in your life That small land has places that you can enjoy For example Cap Cana located in Punta Cana is one resort that you can stay with your family to enjoy the beautiful beach the wonderful sun and one excellent customer service Another thing is the Dominican Carnival is one of the most colorful traditions and more cheerful festivities in the Dominican Republic where all of the Dominican people come together in the city streets to dance share and delight in a celebration of joy When somebody is in The Dominican Republic we feel free because we dont have any restrictions The food is another good thing All the food is natural without artificial flavor and cooked with love Our friends and neighbors are friendly with us and every day they have a party However I dont like so many things there The first thing is the delinquency For example its very dangerous for one person stayed alone in the street late at night because you can get robbed Second the education there is the government just expends 4 of the money on education thats why too much delinquency there is Some of those problems are is not enough chairs and the schools are in bad terms So the opportunity there to have one better future is a little difficult because people need to know
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