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Im attending Stockton for a few reasons but Im ultimately going to college formy future I want to be successful and rich so I can have all the good things in life Ifigure since my rock star career went south Ill have to hit the books Im here atStockton to attain a degree in business and learn the things I need to become a strongbusinessman I enjoy business and want to continue with it for my career Id love to bethe CEO of some huge corporation some day I also want the full college experiencepartying girls partying College gives me something to keep me going Without it I feellike my job at the car wash is taking me nowhere I want to be able to have a familywithout financial stress and worries I used to think I was going to be a professionalbasketball player but Im to short so that didnt really work out the way I planned it Then I thought Id be a professional golfer be Im bored of the sport so I dont want toplay anymore So finally I decided Id have to study my way out of a middle class family I began my college education at a school out in Idaho that I didnt want to be at inthe first place My parents thought that it would be good for me because it was a churchschool and it would keep me out of trouble Well I thought differently I didnt want tobe at that school from the beginning but finally I gave in and agreed to go I think theonly reason I agreed to go was out of respect for my parents and because a friend fromhome was going to room with me So I guess originally I was going to college for myparents and my friends Those are the wrong reasons to be going across country to aschool I didnt want to be going that far in the first
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