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The pain was completely unbarrable It was a brezzyNovembernight in 2009 I remember that night as if it just happenedyesterday I was seventeen and a week past due just a few daysaway from being induced I was in Onslow hanging out with one ofmy best friends Mandy who had just had a baby girl the monthbefore At about seven thirty Greg showed up Greg and I hadgone to school together but never really got along Minutesinto him being there we had began fighting I firgured hewasnt worth my time so I went inside to calm down and forgetthat he was even there It was eight oclock I was laying on thetan love sit watchingTeen Momwhen the first sharp pain came Itdidnt last long but it was so bad it almost floored me Ifelt as if someone had just stabbed me in the side and theywere slowly turning the knife It only lasted for a few minutesthough but it scared me big time because I had barely felt thebaby move all day After I regained my breath I went outsideto tell Mandy and Chris her husband what had just happenedWithout hassating they told me I needed to spend the night justin case I would need to go to the hosptialsince they were myonly ride at the time I didnt fight it at all because Ireally didnt want to be at my apartment alone anyway By twothe following morning the pain way back and way worse Thistime it wasnt going away either Everyone in the house wassound asleep I quietly paced the cold tile floor of thekitchen I was holding my sides and trying to fight back thetears Their newborn baby was just a room awayso I didnt wantto be loud and wake her upAt four AM I had the scary of mylife I went to the bathroom and there was BLOOD I paused fora minute I was confused how could this be happening I waspast due
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