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Being the youngest of three brothers I rarely had new clothing exceptin New Year I always had to wear the old clothes of my brothers notbecause my parents cant afford to buy new things for me but because ofthe frugal habit of my mom I envied my two brothers dressing in newclothes and new shoes but I couldnt Their wearing provoked jealousy inme Once I went shopping with my mom to buy my brothers new uniforms My momand I wandered the mall quite for a long time Shopping with my momreally finds tedious for me but that time I was so involved inshopping Something held my appeal It was neither a perfect tuxedo nora toy plane but it grabbed my attention I suddenly looked up my momand read her mind She looked tough that day and I was afraid of her torequest to buy for me As I touched her lightly on her arm her eyesbristled as if warning me not to request her anythingUntil I got home my mind was still full of the image of that pair ofblack shoes I couldnt hold my eager to tell my mom to buy those shoesfor me so I asked my mom that I needed a pair of new shoes for myspeaking contest in Chinese school I really wished my mom to sayYes She did say but she made a deal with me - to have a goodrank - either first 3 out of all students My moms YES just as wellmade me to say NO at once My eagerness of that pair of black shoeshalted me not to say so I had told a lie to my mom I had never dreamed of competing in thatcontest I just heard that there will be a contest next month Nowonder I had to compete in that contest so that I could keep thepromise I had never been on stage with a
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