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I grew up in a small town called Lancaster Illinois and my single dad was all I had therefore my options for entertainment were limited I spend most of my time venturing around there large woods surrounding my secluded childhood home I was about eight years old when it seemed one of my adventures finally paid off As I was walking down the trail behind our home I saw an animal lying on my path Its fur looked soft as silk a tail like a brush and a body like a coiled spring Simile Her meows were quiet and raspy as if she had to struggle to make a sound I immediately grabbed her up and escorted her straight to my dad My dad was never a hard man to find because he only had three places that he went He was either fishing in our large wrap around pond having target practice with his bow or shot gun or building miscellaneous items for the house in his shed He was in the shed when I ambushed him I have always been Daddys little girl and I knew exactly how to get my way I found a kitty I said in my sweetest tone of voice Her name is Friskie Can I keep her My dad thought for a second and then said Well you already named her so I guess I have no choice but shes your responsibilityI carried my new pet into my house and let her roam around her new domain I quickly noticed that she was not a very friendly kitten In only a few hours of being a cat owner my leg looked like a well-used tack board Simile I could not walk past this spiteful feline without her attacking me She was a snake in the grass and carried the name Friskie very well MetaphorTrying to be a good guardian I decided to give Friskie a
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