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A fathers influence in his daughters life shapes her self-esteemself-image confidence and opinions of men Elizabeth WeissMcGolerick Many women who grow up without a father figure are needyfor a mans love They may dive into relationships or are never able tocommit because they are afraid all men will abandon her like her dad mayhave So the bond between a daughter and her dad is irreplaceable Iwas blessed to have an amazing dad who is a great example My dad is mysupporter protector and my teacherThroughout all of my lifes bumps obstacles and mountains my dadhas been my supporter He is always cheering me on no matter whathappens For example in 5th grade I decided to play volleyball I wason the worst team and was the worst on my team Although I was awfulmy dad was always at my games cheering me on and supporting me no matterhow bad I was In the same way when I was recently struggling withstress anger pain having problems with my friends and I wasnt myself my dad noticed One night my dad pulled me aside and asked meRylee what is going on inside of your heart That night I spilledeverything that was built up inside me He just sat there and listenedHe didnt say anything until I was finished When I did he took all ofmy problems apart piece by piece until we found my true heart problemthat led up to everything else I think that the best thing we can dofor our children is to allow them to do things for themselves allowthem to be strong allow them to experience life on their own termsallow them to take the subway let them be better people let thembelieve more in themselves C JoyBell C This is exactly what mydad believes He lets me make my own decisions even if he knows I amgoing to fail He always says Ita better to learn under my roofthen on your own Frequently
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