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Any man can be a father but it takes someone special to be a dad My dad has been a great constant in my life He supports me ineverything I do and picks me up when I fall This is why when I wastold that he wasnt my real dad it shattered meI was nine years old when my parents asked me to sit down on the couchand told my sisters to go upstairs My parents sat across from me andjust stared Then my mother said Lexi your dad wants to adoptyou You can only imagine how confused I was when she said this andthats when the story beganMy mother got straight As and she was a member of the National HonorSociety She participated in cheerleading and volleyball This was alltaken away from her when she found out she was pregnant with me My momtold the man that she had been with and he didnt look back in his rearview mirror once My mom then told her parents and they supported herdecision to keep her daughter With her parents and siblings supportmy mom graduated as salutatorian of her class and got a full ride toBuena VistaMy mom went to college and brought me with her She hated being aloneso much and away from Jason her boyfriend She dropped out of BuenaVista and moved back home and received her two year Computer Programmingdegree from WITThen my three younger sisters were born and Jason and my mom raised allfour of us together My parents decided to buy this huge hundred yearold house and remodel it This decision brought us closer together as afamilyMy dad has always wanted the best for all four of his daughters Hepushed me to get good grades and be involved in school He tries sohard to protect me from the mistakes he has made and picks me
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