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On a warm sunny and colorful day in May the school bells rang at 3 oclock I remember that on this day I had to ride the bus home which I rarely ever did only when my mom could not pick me up from school While climbing the steps of the bus at the elementary the heat of the stationed bus surrounded me Searching for a spot to sit I kept walking back toward the end of the bus but none of the shiny seats grabbed my attention until I reached the back Then I parked myself two seats from rear After I finally was comfortable the bus started moving The engine could not be heard because of the suffocating noise of the younger childrens chatter echoing throughout the entire bus The trek over to the high school was short but quite toasty because not everyone opened their windows Once we arrived at the high school the teenagers from the high school strolled up the steps strutted down the aisle and found a spot Ben the foreign exchange student from Germany decided to squat down in the seat right in front of mine and across the aisle and up a seat from him was Maggie a girl who had never been nice to me The girl who was the meanest to me and a wee huskier Jen paraded by me and sat in the seat directly behind me because the last two seats no one were off limits All of the students from high school acquired their spots and the bus started driving down the road The younger children were still being incredibly loud but I will admit I joined into the noise when they started to shout at MaggieMaggie will you please please please pull down your window It is so hot in here I am roasting the sweat is pouring outta me I holleredWell too bad Im not snapped Maggie And even if
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