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You should never go anywhere unsupervised Ive learned this the hard way one boring sunny afternoon at my Grandmas house in Rosemead near my house a couple of blocks away It was then when my cousin my sister and I had an encounter with the copsThis whole thing took place when I was about five and my sister and cousin about six My grandma has set up a little gathering at her house with some friends My dad decided to drop me and my sister off at my grandmas house to hang with my cousin Samantha After a while we got bored and I suggested that we walk to my house because I assumed that it was nearby Without telling anyone we just left and started walkingI was leading them to my house even though I wasnt sure where to go I just walked to wherever that seemed familiar to me Then we came upon a police officer talking to a lady wearing a pink sweater even though it was still sunny out When he saw us he asked us where we were going and we told him that we were going home He them asked us if we needed a ride and so we went into his car I didnt know what was going on since I was so young The police officer never asked us once where our house was or anything during our drive to my house as if he knew where he was going He dropped us off at my grandmas houseWhen we got home my grandma my dad and my aunt was waiting right outside in the front door with a worried look on their face As we got out of the car I felt a sense of relief but at the same time I was scared of what will happen next As I approached them I was preparing myself for the lecture that was about to come Instead of
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