scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 559
Trailers barn dances rides and the smell of feces dominate theHamilton County Fair Grounds Most of the families drive to the fairfrom miles away parking their RVs in the worn down grass lot I alwaysknow the fair has started because I can see the dust rolling up the oldhill near the Indian sign where the cars turn right to enter thegrounds For people like me who dont work on the farm all day I goto the fair to show that girls from the little suburb of Madeira canwin Raising a pig is not something just anyone can wake up one morning anddo It takes hard work However you dont have to be born with anatural talent to show a pig We keep our pigs at a barn in Indian Hill called Greenacres Every dayI go to the farm with my dad to feed walk and train my hog My mostrecent pigs name was Blue because of the spots on her back She was aLancashire breed meaning she was white in color Weeks passed and pounds were gained The fair was only a few daysaway We started going down the grounds every other day with Blue soshe could get used to walking in the show ring The night before thefair arrived I put her in her stall and fed her a marshmallow before bedwhich I did to teach her to follow me during the show Waiting for mydad I walked around the barn to check out my competition for the nextday There was one black barrow --a boy-- who was jumping around the penand was all fired up Hoping it would calm down for the show I made amental note to keep Blue away from that him Eager to go I woke up at five the next morning I put my hair in tightFrench braids tucked my white button down into my lucky Levi jeans andlaced my Timberland show boots up to the brim
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA