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Writing my most significant place essay seemed difficult right off the bat I gathered to many places through out my life and could not pick one Then my backyard came to mind and I decided to use that With all the ideas I gathered about my backyard this essay was an easy one to write This essay gave me a great chance to think outside of the box since I did things I never did in other essays Peer response became helpful as I sat down to revise my essay they gave me ideas that I never would have thought of My revision plans consist of many changes I checked over the HOC and LOC issues that made my paper better While siting in my chair typing ideas were floating everywhere Every time I thought of my backyard new images would appear and new ideas would come to me Before this essay I became nervous because I thought that everything I was writing on my paper seemed wrong Figurative language and imagery two of my weak points were two items I struggled the most with Although I felt risky using imagery in the paper I felt that was one of my strengths of the paper I used descriptive details to let the reader know what my surroundings whereThe title took me awhile to think of I actually didnt gather a title until the paper was finished Writing this essay opened my mind to new ideas before this essay I did not like writing now writing is a breeze I plan to take everything that I learn during the course and apply it to this essay to better my writing style Immediately after I was done typing this paper my mom and I sat down and read it over for LOC issues but I am sure glad I went to the writing center
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