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When I was 6 years old my sister my cousin and I went to Wal-Mart to get some snacks While we were at Wal-Mart we realized we had no money which basically was a pointless Wal-Mart trip So we had decided to go back home empty handed sadly We went past the carwash directly to the right of the old Wal-Mart Now Culvers Next thing I knew I am on the ground bleeding I had somehow managed to fly over my handlebars and the dark pavement had come closer and closer to me as I landed My sister and cousin were erratic about my state my knees were all bloodied and scrapped All of a sudden a black muscle car I cannot remember what it exactly it was pulls up next to me and this man says I saw what happened quick get in the car I hopped into the car and for some reason he sped off back towards Wal-Mart He just dropped off at the entrance of Wal-Mart and I went in by myself Inside a cashier saw me and took me with her and she put me onto the counter she started putting peroxide and the strong stich stung my nose on me and Band-Aids onto my scratcheswounds The lady who was about 18 years old was crying as she was helping me I looked into the mirror and saw that my two front teeth which were adult teeth had been busted very badly that freaked me out more My aunt happened to also be at Wal-Mart at the time she saw me and she started to freak out on my cousin They brought me home where I knew hell would break loose My parents when they saw me started screaming at my sister for being incompetent of taking care of me I was still shaky after what had happened I went to the bathroom to spit
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