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As you go through your life you come across many people and among themthere is always someone who touched you in some way I got inspired bymany people in my life but only one has changed my perspective of lifemy father My father acquired his life lessons by overcoming the affliction hefaced growing up in Surat India Persevering throughout his life myfather has fought through copious obstacles to achieve what he hastoday Courage responsibility and devotion are characteristics that myfather possesses These characteristics help him endure through all theobstacles of his life and he therefore has a great influence on me Mydad instills the importance of education and motivates me to try mybest My dad is more than a man who has brought me into this world hehas become a strength that I can feel inside of me He is the continualreminder of my duty to uphold the morals of my family and he is themotivation for achievements in my life Influenced by my father I have worked animatedly toward my goaleven when strongly challenged My father has been the motivating forcebehind my academic achievement His mental strength seems to beunbreakable during hard times and he is remarkably determined toaccomplish anything he sets his mind on I cherish for how he stands upfor the truth and will never back down He taught me love and respecttake years to build but only one lie is worth to break the respect thatwe had earn In India I saw tremendous respect by the people towards myfather and it motivated me to acquire bigger image in society His wordis final Once dad had drawn the line the chances of us arguing againsthim were infinitesimal In a way I think this strange mixture oftoughness and gentleness is what helped my sister and I appraise rightfrom wrong in our teenage years and later on helped us categorizeourselves in a crowd of people Even though we
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