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It was my fifth birthday party at the most magical place ever Club Libby Lou All my friends were invited even my obnoxious older sister Caddy My friends and I walked in and saw the sparkly royal blue walls with the pink carpet We walked over to the seating section and my mom talked to the front desk lady who told us that we were the only birthday party scheduled for that day That meant that we had the whole place to ourselves It didnt matter how loud we were or how long we stayed We had rotations First we got our makeup done No one had ever had makeup on our baby like faces All of us felt like princesses my friends and I wanted to show the world how beautiful we are with luscious makeup on our to soft to touch faces We all got smooth eye shadow Then we got our hair done My sisters gorgeous curls were curlier than ever after her hair was finished My hair was put into a high bun and to top that off I had a mini tiara placed on my miniature head I showed my mom and she thought that I should be a princess especially on my birthday that year because I looked so adorable in her opinion We all had the chance to play dress up but I was the first to pick out an outfit I picked up the most girly fluffy dress in the whole building We all had our own style and we had a photo shoot Right before the photo shoot my tiara went missing and my tiara was the world to me that special day I wanted the tiara because it made me feel like I was on top of the world and that I could do anything that I put my mind on I looked every ware I could not find it I was
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