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Moving is a very frightening experience for most teenagers Moving from a small country town to a huge city seemed like the end of the world I did not know anybody and I barely knew my way around My first day of high school my freshmen year I was dreading I was in a completely new environment and had no idea how to react This was my first day of high school I woke up early to my obnoxious alarm clock as I would normally do any other school day I grabbed my bag and headed out my front door I wasnt quite sure how to get to school My mom showed me once and tried to explain but I am clueless when it comes to directions I walked all the way down my street and turned right I knew my way to the park at least I remembered my mom saying All you have to do is go through the park and you will see the school Remembering that thought I took a deep breath and kept walking I reached the park but it didnt look like an ordinary park I was used to a small park with a swing set and a slide no it was like a forest Trees all around and the paths were all curvy I wasnt sure which direction to head I started to walk and I felt my nerves began to build The further I walked the further I started to freak out I thought my body was going to explode Then I saw the school and I felt a lot better Now entering the school was another challengeThis school was a complete castle compared to my old school It had three floors and then two other separate buildings I went into the school and I felt so claustrophobic There were so many people walking around trying to get to classes I had to go to my home
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