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Coming into college I was only seventeen I had always lived with my parents under there rules and God forbid I broke any of them God was my everything and nothing was going to tear me down My first time on my own living under my own rules I had my best friend with me She was playing basketball for the college so I decided to continue being a manager for basketball that was my fifth year doing so I wasnt too far from home but far enough I had nobody telling me what to do or whenThe dorm life was amazing I loved it I could go to bed at 200 am and nobody told me to go to sleep I was very involved with the dorm life I would go to all the events the planned I would go to the softball baseball soccer volleyball games and of course basketball which was great because I was being paid to do what I love to do be surrounded by basketball do stats etc I was involved strongly in CRU which is Campers Crusade for Christ I had meet the right set of friends who kept me accountable in School and my FaithThen I turned the big Eighteen where my whole life shifted around I had this mentality that I was know an adult legally so therefore I could do what I want when I want and how I want to I would tell everyone that i quoted it so many times I had a job I had decent grades and it was my life so I could do what I want I feel into peer pressure and took my first shot two days after I turned eighteen Then I started hanging out with the wrong crowd still living under the mentality I can do what I want I stopped going to cru and Church saying God will forgive me I was mean
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