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Doug at age 35 had been out all week visiting his brother inMadison going out to dinner with friends barely having time for workHis seemingly dead-end job at Sendiks beginning to get more and moreboring As I walked through the door to pick up a few groceries I sawDoug wondering up and down aisle 7 as if he is searching for somethingto do or someone to talk to As soon as Doug catches a glimpse of me heshouts across the entire store saying Alex hey buddy Having takentwo steps inside I survey the store and notice that Douginadvertently has caught the attention of almost every person thereAs I approach Doug in aisle 7 he greets me with a friendly goofy waveand shakes my hand longer than necessary I think to myself Ah thegood ol Doug Before starting a conversation about how everyone hasbeen and all that Doug initiates his trademark joke Hey Alex lookWhat you got on your shirt there bbuddy Ah yes the old made youlook trick well due to my ignorance of the joke at the time I lookAh Got ya bbuddy and to my surprise he actually had gotten meThis game so straightforward gratified Doug every time he saw meEvery time I would either actually get caught looking or pretend thatDoug had gotten me with his joke over and over again Doug has an amazing quality by which he never I mean never forgetsanything His memory is one of the best I have ever observed Doug willrelentlessly call my house and as infuriating as it gets I will answeras much as I can The conversations seem to have a certain repetitivenature as Doug starts his conversations the same way he always does witha thunderous yet squeaky Hey buddy The constant stuttering in hissentences makes it difficult to comprehend what Doug is tryingarticulate Doug endures a lot more hard work in order to put together asentence but once he does the sentence is
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