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Every little girls dream is to get married and stay home to make a family but Ive always known I wanted something different Of course someday I want a husband and a family but right now Im ready to go to college and gain enough knowledge for an excellent career As I grew up I always said I will NOT work in the Medical Field My mom is a nurse at Barnes and Jewish Hospital and always told me to follow her footsteps so that is possibly why I wanted the exact opposite When I started middle school I started to realize more and more that the Medical Field is the way to go With so many of my friends parents losing their jobs I noticed that none of them worked in hospitals The world will always need medical staff After loads of researching and many visits to my moms work I finally decided on the job I wanted to pursue Going back to 8th grade I remember dissecting pigs yes I know it wasnt for the faint-hearted but I really seemed to enjoy it Having a class primarily of girls of course I was paired up with the one who wouldnt even touch the thing Being quiet feminine myself the boys thought it was weird but I jumped in and started to tear it apart I loved seeing what made it move think and breath Yes I felt bad for the poor piggy but our teacher explained it was a still birth My father grew up a little on the wild side he was extremely athletic and was even a firefighter before finishing college He came home every night with new stories and experiences about the lives he saved on a day to day bases At that point I knew I wanted to help save lives or my job help to keep them alive during surgery My personal aspiration is to become
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