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I was lying in the bed when my mother came home from work She thought I was sleep so she didnt bother coming in my room Once she realized I was still up she came in my room and popped the light on All she kept asking me was I going to school I replied to her with yes Im going to school She was just looking at me then asked me was I sure I was looking like yes why is she asking me this Finally she told me my granddaddy died words really couldnt explain how I felt after she told me that I missed a couple of days from school every time she had to do something dealing with my granddad I was there helping out When my mother first told me that my granddad died I couldnt even just cry that night The next day I woke up I just start crying nonstop I had bags under my eyes and they were bloodshot red I always wanted to stay in my room by myself I would like for it to be quiet so I can just reminisce on the time I enjoyed my granddad living on this earth I just felt terrible when I lost him I would never want to eat I always isolate myself from everybody and I just wasnt feeling school The day my granddad died is so significant to me because he died before I graduated from high school I wanted him to be there to see his granddaughter walk across the stage I could just see the smile he wouldve had on his face It is also significant to me because I cant go see him like we usually do Every Wednesday before we take my brother to boy scout my brother my mother and I would go see him It is not the same anymore because we cant have him at any holiday gathering
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