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On that fairly warm October day when we normally celebrated my fathers birthday we drove over the cracks of the torn up road The car turned into the driveway of the old white house where a man in all black stood My dad rolled down the window to speak with the man who told my dad to pull the car into the line with our other family members Dad laid his hand gently on the gear and pushed it down into park My family all crawled slowly out of the white van doors As my heels fiecely clicked the concrete ground I felt the cool breeze that sent chills up my back and the warm sun shining down on my face My cheeks became warm and my eyes moist as we proceeded towards the front of the home I approached the frosted glass door that a black-haired pale-faced man opened for my family from the inside Within my first step inside the door the musky aroma ran up my nose The first glimpse was of my extended family whose tears fell onto the rose pink carpets forced me to lose my composure I began blubbering as my mom tugged me to her and pulled me in close Her arms surrounded and squeezed my body like a belt The top of my head became wet as she cried with me We walked together into the coat room to hang our black coats and grab an algid glass of water to calm us down The brothers of my father came to the room and spoke with my mother Not able to bare seeing them cry I left to go find my cousin I stepped down to where the carpet changed from pink to navy blue with my eyes only focused on the dark wood casket centered in the front of the room A cold glazed body laid inside it A 57 year old man with black luscious
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