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I began high school in August of 2009 A week after I started my freshman year I met a guy He was dreamy played sports and was so sweet As our relationship got further along all things were great Then we got about 4 months into our relationship and the accusations of me talking to someone else or looking at someone else started So being the woman I am I knew those accusations were not true and that if he was blaming me it must be the other way around I became questioning of our relationship and if I was even ready for this kind of commitment in my freshman year of high school We decided it would be best to just take a break A few months went by and I just couldnt get him off my mind We were constantly talking and going to football games together but just as best friends I began to talk to him about us getting back together and we decided we would give it one more time Once again few months went by and the accusations returned I didnt understand how he could always accuse me and I was always trying to be the best girlfriend possible I never did anything to make him think otherwise One day I decided maybe we should sit down and have a talk I asked him Why do you accuse me of things that are as ridiculous as cheating on you He responded with You are so pretty and I see guys all the time looking at you and everybody at school says you are talking to other people I couldnt believe that that would be his reason I said Who is everybody and why would you believe anyone other than me He told me that it was girls as I expected and that he had been friends with them longer I couldnt believe that I had been so faithful and
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